Elements of Life

Elements of life





Many positive elements
that we need to inculcate,
Since power of traits
defines a character.

Itself one of four classical elements,
with a mention in Greek philosophy,
Defined as life and death in later occultism,
Hindus call it Mother Earth,
that nurtures and sustains.

Growing and breathing
beaming in sun,
Inherently neutral,
Nature sanguine, choleric, 
Phlegmatic or melancholic,
Create immense power
with union of fire and water.

Can we soar towards 
that longing 
for light after death,
If we keep untransformed 
negativity alive ?
Can we lose to 
spiritual consciousness,
and remain unaware
of the Union of elements ?






Written March 15th, 2016
For contest by Brian Davey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 15, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Very deep, Doc. I would answer both questions, no. One must balance all forces in harmony in order to feel fulfilled. Great thought provoking write, Upma. Good luck in contest. Peace dear friend:)
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March 15, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thank you Daniel for all your visits to my page with kind words, appreciate the continued support!
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