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Elements of Earth

Earth wakes in the spring with new sprouting grain
After brittle white frost, or slush under rain

We can see gold arise, where the wheat fields were sown
and the hills are ablaze with a honeycomb loam 

I can see quivering trees, and stiff shocks of corn
The amber of the noon, and the warm curl of hay

The fragrant smell of earth, of green moss and peat
Where tangled bent grass and willows will lean

A muddy bank falls, by the winding rock creek
and the dampness has called us to soon wash our feet

Our blanket is spread upon the spring meadow's girth
As we drink up the peace of the sweet scented earth
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3/15/16  For Elements of Earth Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 20, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
Raven Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
Cheema Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Congrats on your win and placement, Carrie!
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Congrats on your win, Connie:)
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Carrie... big congrats!
Scars Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
Richards Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thank you very much Brian, it was a great theme!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 2:45 AM
Another Wow From me Carrie, I had a feeling from the first line that this poem would end spectacularly and boy did it! #7 I love this beauty Carrie...took me back to Kansas. Hugs, Connie
Underwood Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:30 PM
wow, beautiful
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