Elementary My Dear

I suggest
you continue
teaching ABC's
coloring inside
the lines
if you please
an open mind
is required
not a degree
so stay
on the couch
leave the 
poetry to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Journey Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 7:14 PM
Beware soupers! Got a jealous pitiful hater leavin comments! Say a prayer for her, she needs to find some happiness in her hate filled self righteous life! Her last alias was Hollie killingsworth, then Katy miller! Bless her miserable heart! I won't post her real name.
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 7:08 AM
Omgoodness. I so agree with you Melody. Thank you for making my day. Lol. Love, Carol
Freakasso Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 3:24 AM
Nice one Jean,I liked it.Keep writing.Regards,PRINCE
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