Elementary

You are beautiful to me,
Because I find you in the earth and sky.
Simply, perfectly, unrelenting like the rain.
Grounded, yet soft, you are chalk in my hands
And salt from the sea turned to crystal in the Sun.
Inside I know a quiet love, one that is only silent for show.
The hurricane's force, the lightning's bite
Is nothing. Lost against you and I.
From this, I see the metaphor is truer than it seems:
You are my world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Claudine Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 1:22 AM
you have a beautiful heart to have written this astounding poetry .
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 12:29 PM
"You are my world"- THAT IS B.I.G. Big love!!!!Sweet.OXOX love Anne-Lise
Fitzgerald Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Loved this , hard not to smile as i read . happy new year Annie Declan x
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