Elementals

The little people, Who live underground and care For all of the plants; Tiny gnomes and the Fairies; They do like their privacy. They have secret ways, That are not meant for humans; Powerful magic. Don’t cross the line with Fairies, You could be trapped in their world. Gnomes simply enjoy The privacy of their ways; Uncorrupted by, Human ways which too often, Breed destruction and much doom. These elemental's, Work hard to keep harmony, Among the plants and Animal species on Earth; So let them do what they must.
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Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Profound set of gems in shape of Tanka! Only when we do value and venerate the pillars that sustain our values, creed and perspectives, we do live in Harmony! Enjoyed diving into your work of art depths! My deepest regards M.L. Kiser. Be blessed always.
Kiser Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks so much, Besma. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem and diving into it, blessings to you, as well.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 8:51 PM
A beautifully written tanka, M.L. I am curious now if you are doing what I did when I first found PoetrySoup. Are you experimenting with every type of poem? I have seen three diverse types in a row for you, and I am amazed and happy to say they are all three wonderful! Good for you!
Kiser Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 9:33 AM
OOoh, thank you again. Yes, I've been doing that for quite awhile; some poems fit other forms better than the prose and free verse that I was rhyming; plus I do love a challenge.
Gentile Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Charming fantasy M.L. and so pleasant to consider on this fall morning! Happy Friday xxoo
Kiser Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Mike, I'm glad you enjoyed it; have a great weekend!
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