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Elemental

ELEMENTAL You think that I am Fire And needing air to burn Yet I think you’re water But no tap that I can turn Yet I do have boiling oil Bubbling in a copper urn At times you seem cold And show little concern We’re warm when together An outcome that I yearn But as temperature rises Steam is easy to discern

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/23/2023 10:26:00 PM
Simple and beautiful. Congratulations, Howard.
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:16:00 PM
Excellent job on describing the relationship between fire and water. Great job in inserting the personification of those two elements. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:43:00 PM
Nice poem.
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