Element of Surprise

To keep trying means you are resilient...
But people will try to put you down.
To be happy even when times are bad...
But people will try to put you down.
To keep your improvements hidden people will still try to get
you down and criticise you.
But the day when you plan to let them see what you really have going on, gonna take them by surprise....
 Be an element of surprise....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Buckner Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 11:33 PM
Interesting use of words...??
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June 29, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Interesting
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June 29, 2017 at 11:30 PM
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