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Element Earth

Element Earth 

Closing my eyes i sit on the weak soil
Earth, the mother of life and fertility 
Who gave us strength and beauty
But now stirs restlessly deep below

We disrespected her
And her pain flows throughout the land
With a tear stained face
I see how we have repaid her

Our poisons fill her up
And our fires burn her
Leaving her to choke and to bare blackened scars
Our tall grey lifeless buildings 
Cages her in and keeps her trapped
Away from the shining sun

Hearing the cries of the frightened life
she has to cover her ears to stand the saddening noise  
 
She sends earthquakes and storms
To stop the pain everyone is causing her
Hoping to destroy what is wrong
And so she can free her limp body so she can flourish once again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breidenthal Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 4:22 AM
This is a nourishing poem to read today. Such a brilliant, pleasant verse. Keep it up! A well-deserved 7.
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Magan, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:18 PM
many congrats on your win Magan:-) hugs jan xx
Raven Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Hi Magan, Congratulations on your win in this contest....Vlad.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Magan... big congrats!
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
Szentesi Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 1:14 AM
thx! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:42 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Magan :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Magan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Welcome Magan: A heartfelt write about man's destructive influence on earth. I wrote one on this them called," Eyes of Mother Nature." Best, SuZ
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:07 AM
Magan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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