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Element Earth

Element Earth Closing my eyes i sit on the weak soil Earth, the mother of life and fertility Who gave us strength and beauty But now stirs restlessly deep below We disrespected her And her pain flows throughout the land With a tear stained face I see how we have repaid her Our poisons fill her up And our fires burn her Leaving her to choke and to bare blackened scars Our tall grey lifeless buildings Cages her in and keeps her trapped Away from the shining sun Hearing the cries of the frightened life she has to cover her ears to stand the saddening noise She sends earthquakes and storms To stop the pain everyone is causing her Hoping to destroy what is wrong And so she can free her limp body so she can flourish once again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/3/2016 4:22:00 AM
This is a nourishing poem to read today. Such a brilliant, pleasant verse. Keep it up! A well-deserved 7.
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:35:00 PM
Magan, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2016 8:18:00 PM
many congrats on your win Magan:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:34:00 PM
Hi Magan, Congratulations on your win in this contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:57:00 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Magan... big congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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Magan Szentesi
Date: 3/17/2016 1:14:00 AM
thx! :)
Date: 3/14/2016 12:42:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Magan :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:18:00 PM
Magan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:02:00 AM
Welcome Magan: A heartfelt write about man's destructive influence on earth. I wrote one on this them called," Eyes of Mother Nature." Best, SuZ
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Date: 3/7/2016 6:07:00 AM
Magan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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