Elegy To a Family House-Win

Why should you remain a family house
If you are dilapidated, shattered and tattered
In this summer of old age.

Why should you remain a family house
If the house garden bears a barren look
Tearing away its leaves and flowers.

Why should you remain a family house
If the birds do not build their nests
Migrating instead to some other places.

Why should you remain a family house
If you don’t have to wait for birds’ return
In the lonely colorless evenings.

Why should you remain a family house,
If the inhabitants are in the outhouses
Dangling like a jaundiced curtains.

Why should you remain a family house.
If you are not cheered by the chirping

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Dr. Ram Mehta     Contest: Beloved Poems by Giorgio Veneto
This is my autobiographical poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 5:42 PM
a melancholy piece Dr Ram...congrats on your win
Onclaud Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 2:28 PM
sad yet well written with emotive lines, dr. ram.. cheers on your fine win!
Horsch Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram. A very good poem.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Aha an amazing poem allegorical on when birds leave d family nest. Complaining fun to read. But famly is gud. CONGRATS on yor win. Tnx 4 yor greetings.
Garg Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 4:38 AM
If I am not wrong, I can see the frustration. Those who settle in other countries don't think of their parents, whom they are leaving behind. Quote by Khalil Gibran, “Your children are not your children. They are the sons and daughters of Life’s longing for itself. They come through you but not from you. You may give them your love but not your thoughts. For they have their own thoughts.” (Please excuse me for taking liberty.)
Garg Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 4:39 AM
Congrats on your win, sir.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Beautifully penned Dr. Ram, I cud probably see my future in this !! Touched my heart really !!
Minardi Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:17 AM
Interesting, Dr. Ram :)
Devnath  Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Wonderful expression with wonderful thoughts. The two lines have touched me much, "If the inhabitants are in the outhouses, Darling like a jaundiced curtains". Enjoyed it with heart.
Green Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 7:44 PM
tragic failers,,,,wonderful poem...
Neels Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 9:07 AM
Dr. Ram I love the 'barren' look line.. Quite a haunting elegy.. Enjoyed this loads tonight..
Dey Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 3:05 AM
Dangling like a jaundiced curtains....loved this expression..
Sweetheart Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:48 PM
excellent elegy Dr. Ram.. resonates with emotion and good points fashioned in every stanza.. enjoyed with luv my friend..luv..
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