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Elegance Via Quill

Of writing she's got it, simply read her writes
Lines flowing into lines her words delight
Intelligence with aplomb, crafted so 
Viewing leads to smiles our eyes bestow
Elegance via quill, generates, grows

Each and every theme written by she
Launched by her mind to every degree
Outstanding use of forms I so agree
Interesting differences, learnings desired
Sharing others cultures, so inspired
A heart of hearts, that will never grow tired




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Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2014 3:01:00 PM she sounds amazing! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 10/17/2014 12:42:00 PM She certainly is Richard, thank you for visiting my page, James :)

Robert Lindley Date: 10/15/2014 9:38:00 PM You say it so well. Who is she? I can think of a dozen poets here , maybe a few more that fit that description. A fine write, so very smooth and a mystery too. Bravo my friend!!!! Solid 7 and share it you care to my friend.... pm me who the mystery lady is.. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 10/16/2014 2:29:00 PM The writers heart, shrouded in mystery, to be revealed, or to history. Only time can tell, if such words ring true, or are they simply words, to lure the readers view, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/15/2014 8:30:00 PM "a heart of hearts,that will never grow tired..." a lovely ending to a beautiful poem.. :) our age may rust and roll 'cause of certain struggles but let it be may our remain young and same with its dedication to love and spread it anyhow.. our poems are results, well for some, [like me] at times their thoughts, experiences, day to day events, but I really admire those writers who can write about any theme and somehow they can magnify something which is so basic.. :) thanks for the share.. :D Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/17/2014 7:02:00 AM mr. James. mmmmmmn!!!! love each line ... :) ;) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/17/2014 6:59:00 AM hahahaha. :) when I post my comment I reread it again and find out a word is missing up and it its the heart . on the line: may our ---- remain young and young... :) see above.. :D :P Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/17/2014 6:49:00 AM hahahaha. :) when I post my comment I reread it again and find out a word is missing up and it its the heart . on the line: may our ---- remain young and young... :) see above.. :D :P James Fraser Date: 10/16/2014 2:22:00 PM ...continue* Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/16/2014 7:30:00 AM *may our hearts....

Jan Allison Date: 10/15/2014 7:12:00 PM There are many wonderful poets that this could relate to James - a wonderful tribute - like the new avatar my friend:-) I have missed seeing you around :-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 10/16/2014 2:18:00 PM Hiya Jan, thank you. I've been busy of late, but the dark nights are upon us, and this 'Dark Knight' shall be writing more. The new Avatar, that's me, James :) xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/15/2014 4:26:00 PM She must be quite a woman James.An exquisite poem James.It feels so good to.see you,Carolyn,our Dane and others back..Yes it does. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 10/16/2014 2:06:00 PM It's such a joy simply to write, is it about anyone, you might be right. It simply may be, pure simple words, taken in by ones minds, allowing their minds to be heard. ( Yes I noticed Carolyn & Dane have been posting. It's good for the Soup to have such seasoned writers as it's foundation. Thanks kindly for stopping by Charmaine, James :)