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Eleemosynary Ubiquity

sawed-off on the crimson emerald from a cloudy sky squeal and, at times, the reason low-slung why sparkles of a pearly salver modicum of encrusted damask mist befuddles me albeit moon, amber, and opalescence spawn a charming sight the perspective strikes each crevice of the flesh. and psyche advise shrouded in a cinereous cloud hapless and helpless, a glum-blue wolf growls out a bluesy bemoan. creating a lacuna of gallivant love touchstone leaden wails of anguish rhythmic echoed refrain plainchants of auric yearning reminiscent of challah aiming for eleemosynary seeds cahoots to germinate and thrive
2nd place contest winner Written: March 20, 2023 A Strand No 1201 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:46 PM
So wonderfully wrought Lasaad. I love the way you entwine words and images. So evocative and thoughtful! Congratulations on your wonderful win!! Easter blessings of joy!
Bueckert Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 8:19 AM
quite the wordsmith, this is beautifully written
Paul Hempstone Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 4:30 AM
Your poem is a beautifully crafted work of art that evokes powerful emotions and imagery. Congratulations on your win!
Buehler Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 9:05 PM
I enjoyed learning some new words from this fantastic poem, with its stunning images, Lasaad. Congratulations on your win. :)
Alex Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 8:10 PM
"modicum of encrusted damask mist", "cinereous cloud" - scenes and senses and emotions beautifully illustrated. Congratulations!
Maverick Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 12:57 PM
Emlusenary sedentary hardly any...' See I have Flair too..' LOL))) look at that rhyme scheme Ya won't get many like that you kmow..' You do.? Well there is no call for that sort of response.! I Advise you to take'em while they're going for A song almost.' I mean its not often you get Others offering the very stuff of dreams to you Bad dreams..? Did I hear right or are my facultys Un.? Un un faculmalated? I give up I really do ' Btw I did like this piece..But just how do you Germinate cahoots.'
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Full of intrigue my friend. A winning poem you wrote.
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