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Electrifying Touch

Hands satisfy and hearts gratify, may my love for you exemplify as my touch electrifies. One Liner About Love Sponsor: Silent One October 8, 2016

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/13/2016 1:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Laura:) Great one liner on various aspects of love:) These one liner contests fill up so fast, I could not even think...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/10/2016 4:33:00 PM

and you flow with love, lou... bes cheers on your award..huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2016 8:50:00 PM

great monorhyme inside of one line Laura!! Congrats on your win.

James Tate

Date: 10/9/2016 1:24:00 PM

Laura, you maximized the use of one line here. Good job.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2016 1:15:00 PM

Yours is a strong and passionate love, Laura...indeed, electrifying:) ~ Congratulations on this worthy win. Regards // paul

Shirley Long

Date: 10/8/2016 2:31:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem, it details such gratifying details of what love is.

Constance La France

Date: 10/8/2016 12:22:00 PM

Laura, I like it, wonderful for the contest ~

Paloma P

Date: 10/8/2016 10:28:00 AM

Electrifying! Nice one liner. :)