Electrical Dawn

Seems like we can't 
get over it
       Our lives have become
reflections
          of the electrical dawn
       Don't ask too many 
questions
       The answers may drive 
you mad
      The sparks we have 
          seen
suggest the power we 
     have become subservient 
to 
    In a dark room 
     a       bulb
is lit
Eyes strain to read 
printed matter
In the distance 
the sound of a radio 
Electrical Dawn 
Something we must
face if we are 
   To continue on 
  As we have in 
the past
The sharp ring of the 
alarm clock
makes us rise 
from sleep 
   As dawn arrives 
the current that 
   powers the juggernaut
is what we must now 
deal with
In the early morning 
     you can hear 
soft voices 
    singing 
Our only hope is 
to escape 
Later.... deep within 
and without 
    those voices suggest 
other possibilities 
    We must seize 
upon   
    If we wish 
to continue onwards
   as living beings 
on this blue orb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/8/2011 12:54:00 AM
Yes, we indeed are living in this kind of age now. Remnds me of that sci fi book title.I sing the body electric.I am sure you have heard of that! Luv,andrea
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Date: 3/25/2009 7:31:00 PM
Morning becomes Electric in this awesome write, Matthew!
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Date: 3/21/2009 1:19:00 PM
Much to think about in this poem. I like the varied format. Creative title! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/18/2009 5:07:00 AM
Other possibilities indeed. I agree with Kristin and got the same sense from your write. Love your writing Matthew. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/18/2009 1:57:00 AM
Sounds like the dark tower, here, by King. I hear the voices, and heed them. lovely and meaningful, love Kristin
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Date: 3/17/2009 3:01:00 PM
creative and thoughful as we go on through the struggle. John H Loving III
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