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Electric Sundays

please don't turn my days into endless sun shine and green fields reaching as far as the eyes can see. Most of the time you don't mean it. Just trying to look poetic before a group of the worst dictators of any poetic form. I know the sky is blue and the sun is warm and the ocean roars. 2007: not to be negative but this is the year I first heard your bull---- lets leave it there. Tell me about the lord un-cut and down to the point. Give me a super natural experience. Not a super power human being looking to exploit the purpose of the words written to reprove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/23/2012 9:34:00 AM
Go get em Tiger! Fluff and too flowery poetry is boring without the meat of emotions, situations, and some sort of reason to write it.
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:42:00 PM
I just love reading poetry that shows the release of a poets feelings. I enjoyed reading yours today Derrick. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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