Matthew Anish Poet Imagism

Electric Evening

Powered by molecules 
which continue to strike 
    each other 
with force 
The evening turns electric 
      we are 
 transformed 
into 
   something altogether new
Let's move with the flow 
Change is the essence of life 
This dance continues all night 
   and on into morning 
We shouldn't waste time 
   on frivolities 
Our atomic fate awaits 
   us during 
another electric evening
as power surges 
  old verities 
are swept away 
   with the night wind

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Wilma Neels September 23, 2010 at 6:50 AM Dont I just love the idea of being swept away with the night wind.. This has such a dreamy, wishful feel about it Matthew.. love Wilma

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2010 at 3:51 PM Great passionate write about a romantic happening ..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I repaired the clasp on the Pearl Necklace by sewing it back.. I didn't have the money at that time for the repair..I need to take it to a professional and have it repaired now and cleaned after all these years...Thanks for clearing up the Pearly Gates for me..Those Pearls will be 1500 miles high...Some more Pearls that will be a sight to behold..Sara

Doris Culverhouse September 20, 2010 at 7:29 AM well written, my friend! Enjoyed reading today!

Skat A September 19, 2010 at 12:26 PM Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2010 at 10:13 AM It's funny how everthing goes back to molecules and things electric. Isn't there some sc fi book I sing the body electric? Good writing, Matt. Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown September 17, 2010 at 9:10 AM As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Matthew. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse September 17, 2010 at 6:09 AM sounds zippity zingy stimulating!! enjoyed!!