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Electric Evening

Powered by molecules which continue to strike each other with force The evening turns electric we are transformed into something altogether new Let's move with the flow Change is the essence of life This dance continues all night and on into morning We shouldn't waste time on frivolities Our atomic fate awaits us during another electric evening as power surges old verities are swept away with the night wind

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Date: 9/23/2010 6:50:00 AM
Dont I just love the idea of being swept away with the night wind.. This has such a dreamy, wishful feel about it Matthew.. love Wilma
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:51:00 PM
Great passionate write about a romantic happening ..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I repaired the clasp on the Pearl Necklace by sewing it back.. I didn't have the money at that time for the repair..I need to take it to a professional and have it repaired now and cleaned after all these years...Thanks for clearing up the Pearly Gates for me..Those Pearls will be 1500 miles high...Some more Pearls that will be a sight to behold..Sara
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:29:00 AM
well written, my friend! Enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 9/19/2010 12:26:00 PM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 10:13:00 AM
It's funny how everthing goes back to molecules and things electric. Isn't there some sc fi book I sing the body electric? Good writing, Matt. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:10:00 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Matthew. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:09:00 AM
sounds zippity zingy stimulating!! enjoyed!!
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