Electric

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See the source image Yawn, I know you are sleepy....

Electricity charged the air Sounds of thunder rolled Silence of the night dispelled The storm takes sleep's toll Hairy tried to bark the thunder Away, sleep only left After a sleepless night My brain seems very deft A dog trainer he needs or maybe A disciplinarian Love has not fixed his problems He's quite the barbarian

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2018 8:25:00 AM

Beautiful, unique, lovely, rare, effable and creative. Lovely work.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/17/2018 6:42:00 AM

Hairy is Hairy...he's hearing thunder...trouble could be around the corner...All the best Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2018 10:35:00 AM

Michael, Thunder is trouble for Hairy. The lightning is what gets us though. He can sense the electricity in the air I think before the storm gets anywhere near and he starts to get anxious. A very nervous and anxious dog. Came to us like that but he is better than he once was. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/17/2018 4:40:00 AM

Nothing worse than broken sleep, bet your dog slept all day to catch up lol. Tom.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2018 10:34:00 AM

Tom, It can get rough around here trying to get sleep but the night after the storm and the temperature dropped down to low forties again we both slept soundly. It was wonderful. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Christopher Goss

Date: 4/16/2018 8:10:00 PM

Great write!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2018 10:33:00 AM

Christopher, Thanks for dropping by. Glad that you thought this one to be great. Your presence at my page is appreciated. Sara