Electric

Electricity charged the air
 Sounds of thunder rolled
 Silence of the night dispelled
 The storm takes sleep's toll

 Hairy tried to bark the thunder
 Away, sleep only left
 After a sleepless night
 My brain seems very deft

 A dog trainer he needs or maybe
 A disciplinarian
 Love has not fixed his problems
 He's quite the barbarian

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Funom Makama

April 28, 2018 at 8:25 AM

Beautiful, unique, lovely, rare, effable and creative. Lovely work.

Arturo Michael

April 17, 2018 at 6:42 AM

Hairy is Hairy...he's hearing thunder...trouble could be around the corner...All the best Sara

Sara Kendrick

April 17, 2018 at 10:35 AM

Michael, Thunder is trouble for Hairy. The lightning is what gets us though. He can sense the electricity in the air I think before the storm gets anywhere near and he starts to get anxious. A very nervous and anxious dog. Came to us like that but he is better than he once was. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Tom Cunningham

April 17, 2018 at 4:40 AM

Nothing worse than broken sleep, bet your dog slept all day to catch up lol. Tom.

Sara Kendrick

April 17, 2018 at 10:34 AM

Tom, It can get rough around here trying to get sleep but the night after the storm and the temperature dropped down to low forties again we both slept soundly. It was wonderful. Thanks for dropping by. Sara