Eldritch Quest

Heartbeat ringing in my ears
Wondering why I am here
Eldritch quest of many years
Farewell, love to you always, my dear

To the alabaster summit I longingly stare
Somehow certain I will find the answer there
Fervent question that drives my every care
New ridges on my neck and wide eyes that stare

The expedition is going slowly awry 
Silently, yet reflected in their eyes
Though I would not drive them to die
Not whether or not, but I must know the why

A little of me drains into each dark crevasse
Air grows ever thinner as the miles pass
Further up, I find they’ve left me en masse
Black mouth I find at the trail’s impasse.

Down a tunnel I find the answers I have wished
City filled with my cousins, the man-fish!
An ancient design, my transmuting flesh
It is the home for which I have always wished! 

Ia! Ia! Chtulhu Fhthagn!

5/20/16
© by the Author
For contest: At the Mountains of Madness
Sponsor: Timothy Hicks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/27/2016 11:10:00 PM
Both are perfect, picture and poem.. Closing stanza, pure gold my friend..
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Robert!
Date: 5/25/2016 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine placement in The Mountains of Madness contest Tom!!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/25/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, Brian!
Date: 5/25/2016 1:17:00 AM
Transmutation and Man-fish! The Cthulhu are surely about! Great write, Tom, congrats on your placement. ~karam~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/25/2016 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Karam!
Date: 5/24/2016 4:07:00 PM
A fine poetic tribute to one of my favorite authors ... you were only one of two entries that actually got my reference to Mountains of Madness! Very well penned. Thanks for your patience ... this contest was rather maddening to judge with such variety of themes and styles! Check out my blog and tell me about your poem :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/24/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy!
Date: 5/21/2016 1:49:00 AM
Yikes...chills from this one Tom! It is a great entry and should score high! #7 :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/21/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks, Connie!
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