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E'Lan Vitale

The vanity of stars that strive to light the vastness of the sky Plucked from the blue enigma their beauty makes me joyfully cry They are distanced too far for our dreaming to contemplate why This ultimate design is there to teach and mystify The ego of the sun caresses all within her reach Yielding her fire to bequeath life to be given or be breached Her power is omnipotent for all things living to love and reap And seep within our life's blood to have, hold and keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/16/2019 12:03:00 PM
Lonna congratulations on your win in my writing challenge.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/23/2019 8:24:00 PM
I am so pleased that you like it. Look forward to the next contest
Date: 9/12/2019 12:49:00 PM
- Lonna, congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/23/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise Lonna
Date: 9/10/2019 5:10:00 PM
this is so lovely. I hope it appeared on the winner list!! Love that line "ego of the sun"
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:10:00 PM
yes, I see it now. YOu are on the list as you much deserved to be. Congratulations
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