El Paso

I like El Paso...the heat, the dust, the heat,
I like the cars and the hats the cops wear,
cowboys in a rusty B movie,

but most of all I like the people, the 
janitors and doctors and newsreaders, 
who don't care if they're American,
Mexican or both...

and the bars are cool, so cool... some
smell of menthol and others like a clean 
latrine,
but that's OK..it's alright and I don't judge, 

and the girls are single and friendly and they 
like you 'cos your'e tall and white, with dollars 
and tooled brown boots 

but most of all I like the warm wind that blows
in sweet guitar music and shimmering light
from across the big bridge, tussleing the hair
of the janitors and doctors and newsreaders,

who don't know if they're American, Mexican, or both.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/2/2015 9:55:00 AM
Hey Peter, what a wonderful and vivid expression of El Paso. Even though I have never visited there, you have a great ability to make me feel as though I have. I love this and thank you for sharing. Neva
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:14:00 AM
And don't (or shouldn't) care whether they are Mexican or American or both...I like El Paso, too...the mountain(s), the cacti, the food, the big rocks, the interstate that takes you from East to West, Texas to New Mexico, Arizona, and California...and I like your poem.
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 2/2/2015 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Leo...I appreciate you taking the time to read me..Peter
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