El Pais Del Sur

Although it may not be MY CALIFORNIA you were describing....but it really describes that forrest/mountainous terain....of many destinations....so I take back the comment that it was such knowledge of CALI....it just initially...made me think of CALIFORNIA when I read it....Either way...It's good writting friend....very nice Cinquain~....your friend Jane

Bellowing your expertise and knowlege of the California I know and loooooove! Beautiful Brian! Fantastic piece of redwood and laurel!!!! Nice descriptive words....

Brian, that's perfect for Big Sur. I take it you've visited?

The tone you create here is one of warm invitation. You have a gift for bringing the sensual wonders of nature to life with your intricately structured pieces. Very well done, Brian! Donna

Brian, didn't know what to expect by the title. But came to read it anyways and so glad I did. It is truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

I can smell, feel, move among and touch this incredible Cinquain! Brian, words don't work its so good!! fav jim

Wood you believe it , Brian , a poem as lovely as a tree ..... Speaking of which , those three next door are also running wild . Must call the cops , perhaps the " special-branch" .....