El Pais Del Sur

Big Sur, oak and redwood and open chapparel, fragile groves of bay & laurel- run wild

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Jane Bowen

Date: 7/14/2009 7:36:00 PM

Although it may not be MY CALIFORNIA you were describing....but it really describes that forrest/mountainous terain....of many destinations....so I take back the comment that it was such knowledge of CALI....it just initially...made me think of CALIFORNIA when I read it....Either way...It's good writting friend....very nice Cinquain~....your friend Jane

Jane Bowen

Date: 7/14/2009 7:32:00 PM

Bellowing your expertise and knowlege of the California I know and loooooove! Beautiful Brian! Fantastic piece of redwood and laurel!!!! Nice descriptive words....

Jim Wilson

Date: 7/14/2009 2:15:00 PM

Brian, that's perfect for Big Sur. I take it you've visited?

Donna Golden

Date: 7/14/2009 9:06:00 AM

The tone you create here is one of warm invitation. You have a gift for bringing the sensual wonders of nature to life with your intricately structured pieces. Very well done, Brian! Donna

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2009 4:31:00 AM

Brian, didn't know what to expect by the title. But came to read it anyways and so glad I did. It is truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/14/2009 3:20:00 AM

I can smell, feel, move among and touch this incredible Cinquain! Brian, words don't work its so good!! fav jim

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/14/2009 2:42:00 AM

Wood you believe it , Brian , a poem as lovely as a tree ..... Speaking of which , those three next door are also running wild . Must call the cops , perhaps the " special-branch" .....