Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

Eighty Five Below

EIGHTY FIVE BELOW

flapping and gliding
underneath the Springtime clouds
eighty-five below

                ~ humans hawking up pollen
                                                          a proximal perfect day ~

4/10/2019

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jessica Renee Dawson April 18, 2019 at 12:05 PM A really lovely read! I read it several times just to take in all the imagery! Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2019 at 3:51 PM Thank you, J.R.!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 10, 2019 at 6:20 PM Well done Kim Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2019 at 6:49 PM Thank you, Allen!

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2019 at 4:56 PM I enjoyed this one, Kim. Sure wish I'd see some days like this around here. I think small typo in your title. Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2019 at 6:49 PM Thank you and for bringing attention to my typo!