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Eight Word Challenge: Making Sense of Meaning

A horde of words and thoughts shackled by lost meaning loiter in my mind memory cartridge wizened by time elicit mordacious statements Wondering, asking a trifle for your thoughts eh' Such foolish banter Written on March 22, 2017, for the 8-Word Challenge contest by John Hamilton

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John Hamilton

Date: 4/12/2017 12:34:00 PM

Hey PPD, sorry left you out in my comments, really great use of the words, and in a restrictive form, so kudos to you, congrats on a fine placement!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/5/2017 9:17:00 AM

I see you and me have somewhat similarly used the eight words, though you've used it better in such a restrictive form:) strange as it seems, I've never read your poetry before, and it's pure coincidence:) I wish you all the best for the contest, Dupins:)

Roy Pett

Date: 3/27/2017 10:02:00 AM

Great Haikus very cleverly written, good luck in contest, Roy, :)

Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 3/27/2017 12:34:00 PM

Thanks Roy!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2017 9:20:00 PM

wow, VERY clever to do such a short poem using his words. I applaud you!!

Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 3/24/2017 9:46:00 PM

Thank you so much! That means a lot coming from you. I have thoroughly enjoyed your poetry.