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Date written: 12/13/2022

Egret In Flight

the setting sun
               s i l h o u e t t e s
        a great white egret
in sky of marigold....

            so vivid;
a portrait of grace in flight!

it's long neck, 
arched;

o   u   t   s   t   r   e   t   c   h   e   d wings....

rhythmically flapping,
         flying off
to an untold destination.
                          look at it!
just look at it go...
              up, 
       up, 
up,
             up and away!
       bye bye, bird...
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Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your win Edward! We have a marine preserve with a levee for walking close to us. I marvel at the beauty and flight of the egrets that you so perfectly describe in poetic artistry. Blessings of Christmas joy to you my friend. Let's raise a toast to the New Year and the blessings of more wonderful poems!!!
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Very nice. I can see it happening. Beautifully written :)
Ibeh Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi:-)
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 5:33 AM
Your descriptions bring forth the images for the reader. Imagism so well done!
Ibeh Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Thank you very much, as always, Vijay:-)
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