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Ego's Game of Life and Death

It can't be that important If I believe it came That it arrived here long ago And I did play its game I saw the ones before me I saw them all the same It told me differentiate By giving each a name I saw a world give voices To those who would take aim With bow and arrow, knife, or gun To decimate and maim It can't be that intrusive If I don't go to shame But now I make a better choice of Where I place my blame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2009 8:19:00 PM
Beautiful, and best wishes in this new chance of yours expressed so wonderfully.:) Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:08:00 PM
Much to think about in your words. Congratulations on your upcoming marriage! What an exciting time for you. Keep on writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 3/2/2009 5:36:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one. Full of depth and improves on every read
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