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Ego pride rise, we behold in surprise Filled with lies, bubble yet does not capsize Fed by thought, spiralling in narrow slots Shaky hubris of consciousness, fear fraught When we cease to weigh and size, ego dies Voice of conscience stifled, weary soul sighs Earth entity’s antics, gently decries Floundering despot, origin forgot Ego pride rise Discerning eye within, does truth apprise Revealing Gods path, through life’s lows and highs Tragic bondage to desires ego brought In web of our making, we are thus caught High time we recognise, as do monks wise Ego pride rise 01-June-2021

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Date: 6/1/2021 7:30:00 AM
A LARGE theme you express and tackle. This I think you have truly well penned. I liked the rhyming, a natural feel to it. An unwanted topic, but so needed. Hugs
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:42:00 AM
Happy you enjoyed, Sally!

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