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Ego Monster Under the Bed

For the most part you have known It would never leave you Of its own will. Thus it would be far more sensible For you to see That it was never there to begin with. So you could cease its endless worries Time and time again And live the life you've always dreamed.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/21/2009 10:44:00 AM

Ego Monster waiting to eat us alive---lets not give a chance--great write as usual Yoni--charma

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/1/2009 8:24:00 AM

Hey, this one is pretty interesting, starting from the title; I imagined this humongous mirror under the bed, with mustache and all, and that was nice; the speech in verse was awsome, a nice way of advise in here, and that's pretty true, in the end, we are the ones who live, just as we jump or roll; thanks for the experience =D

Sue Mason

Date: 5/25/2009 10:05:00 PM

Do you really suppose the "ego" is real? Or are we all part of a "collective consciousness"? And, is it under the bed OR in the closet ... LOL ... Interesting write you've done here, Yoni. Love the title ... smile ...

Brian Anderson

Date: 5/21/2009 10:15:00 PM

sometimes, yoni, my friend, i believe that you and me are one and the same. no wonder you are one of my favorite writers.... not just on the soup..... i mean, period

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/21/2009 12:14:00 PM

hmmmmm " part of a person which distinguishes itself from others, the "I" part of the psyche" I like your psyche! just don't be an egomaniac LOL Light & Love

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/21/2009 3:30:00 AM

Could not agree more. what an excellent way to describe that monser named ego. love, Kristin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2009 8:54:00 PM

And you have mail.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2009 8:52:00 PM

Yoni, YOU'VE BEEN TAGGED! Go for it, friend! Love, Carolyn

Date: 5/20/2009 2:07:00 PM

Much for the reader to ponder in this poem. Interesting perspective with a creative title. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments mine. Have a good day! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2009 12:04:00 PM

This is, indeed, very creative, Yoni! You certainly have a gift for exploring human behavior in your poetry. That "ego monster" lies in wait for all! Excellent concept and writing! Will be sending you soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/20/2009 4:03:00 AM

very original and thought-provoking! nice work! Yoni...Jim

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/19/2009 10:05:00 PM

Very Creative and great choice of words. I like it! Nate