Ego 'i'

i . . . . . . The ego places itself on a pedestal; forming a personality, separate from the oneness of life.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/30/2020 12:59:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this truth through your poetic style. God bless you.

Elaine George

Date: 11/29/2020 9:02:00 PM

VERY DEEP AND ORIGINAL. MANY CONGRATS, P M. ~ Elaine

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2020 3:22:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Yes, the ego can take control and ruin a person's life. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2020 11:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, P.M. :) - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/7/2019 2:42:00 PM

I just had to come back and "Fav" this one; Brilliant.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2018 7:48:00 AM

I agree. We are taught to compete while in infancy. Ego begins then and some spend the rest of their lives trying to be released from our ego based thoughts. : )

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 10:05:00 AM

It does indeed; clever.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/4/2018 6:14:00 PM

So true, which is so very sad indeed. The world would be a better place, if more put others before themselves. You seem to have a good heart. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2018 3:15:00 PM

Daring Smart Brilliant