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The ego places itself on a pedestal, 
forming a personality, 
separate from the oneness of life.

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Beata Agustin

November 30, 2020 at 12:59 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this truth through your poetic style. God bless you.

Elaine George

November 29, 2020 at 9:02 PM

VERY DEEP AND ORIGINAL. MANY CONGRATS, P M. ~ Elaine

Sara Kendrick

November 29, 2020 at 3:22 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Yes, the ego can take control and ruin a person's life. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 29, 2020 at 11:29 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, P.M. :) - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

February 7, 2019 at 2:42 PM

I just had to come back and "Fav" this one; Brilliant.

Connie Marcum Wong

November 20, 2018 at 7:48 AM

I agree. We are taught to compete while in infancy. Ego begins then and some spend the rest of their lives trying to be released from our ego based thoughts. : )

M. L. Kiser

November 6, 2018 at 10:05 AM

It does indeed; clever.

Brandy Nicole

November 4, 2018 at 6:14 PM

So true, which is so very sad indeed. The world would be a better place, if more put others before themselves. You seem to have a good heart. ~ Brandy