Eglantine

Forsake me not, for I would pine 
and waste, like tendrils on the vine 
that shrivel when the rains abscond 
and nullify our special bond. 

For eglantine shall flourish not 
when kept in shade, stilled in the pod, 
nor will our love, without the spark 
of nature, and the love of God. 

Remain here, nestled in my care, 
and feel the measure of His power, 
with nourishment for heart and soul, 
as the elements sustain the flower.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Eastman Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Such a romantic soul you have. I truely love reading your work.
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October 15, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Hi Keith - A rose is a rose and a poem by Keith is a poem by Keith. I'm not sure what the previous observation means but it's good. You are the master once more at perfect rhyme and truthful heart. Love you and hope you are well. I'm recovering (nicely) from a knee replacement.
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September 29, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Really smooth rendition on your awareness of object and subject and here also; a super overall ambience Keith..' Good piece indeed!
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September 28, 2013 at 12:25 AM
Hi Keith , long time no see, hope you doing well, really enjoyed this poem, a 10 on 7 !!!!
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