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Eggshells

for some reason
around your fortress
you’ve built 
insurmountable blockades
and from their safety
you thrive on lashing out
catapulting showers 
of fireballs
and cannonballs

it took a while for me
to realize we were at war
I simply didn’t know
in hindsight it’s been going on for years
but I really truly didn’t know
I knew enough to keep my distance
and stay out of the firing range

you’ve always had me
walking on eggshells
why? I haven’t got a clue
after all these years 
to tell the truth 
somewhere along the way
I simply finally lost interest 
so keep doing what you’ve got to do
and I’ll continue
liking you the way you are

the last of eggshell crumbs
have turned to lovely sand
and your fireballs
now look to me
like nothing less
than fireworks display



AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on June 16, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 17)  sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - 1ST PLACE
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Kannan Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Great imagery, Line...
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Supraja ~
Daniel Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:39 AM
A powerful poem, Line:)
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Jo. Much appreciated ~
Mcintosh Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:42 AM
Love this... brilliant write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you so much, Gina ~
Romios Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Been there, done that))) Love the conclusion. In your honesty, you believed them! I get taken in easily....far too trusting, You’conclusion is superb Pangie xx
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Panagiota ~
Rose  Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 6:28 PM
I think you show a healthy attitude in this poem Line, it takes a brave woman to see them as nothing more then shells, thank you for showing your strength, I admire that :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Thanks you, Mystic. Much appreciated ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Interesting, dear friend!
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
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