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Egg Salad

Insides become hard-boiled. Yolks and whites; fork them up. Love in Miracle Whip. Between slices - pickup. We won’t step on eggshells; Consensual crack up.
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Loving Iii Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Got to give it to Miracle Whip for becoming one of those things that make eggs great. A project I'll never give up.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 4:24 AM
I know! Thankfully my husband loves my sandwiches. I will add a little dry mustard and pinch of cayenne along with salt and pepper. He also loves a lot of onions so I put in a reasonable amount and have more cut up so he can add them. Yummy!
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 10:17 PM
Yum :) My best friend introduced me to egg salad sandwiches back in high school, with Miracle Whip and relish. I think you inspired me for our Sunday lunch ;)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Yay! Can you hear me clapping…lol! Enjoy!
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Fork 'em up... Crack 'em up... Whip 'em up... Serve 'em up. ~ up, up and away!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Lol
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Egg salad with a dash of salt and black pepper is a prominent sandwich overall, and chicken salad sandwiches are second best.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:26 PM
I like chicken salad over egg salad but both are good!
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 12:04 PM
What a cute poem with that fun picture. I love egg salad sandwiches. Almost as much as tuna grilled cheese
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:26 PM
Those are good too! Hugs! Glad you liked the pic!
Jones Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 11:33 AM
What a fun write! Love the picture too!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, sweet one!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:40 PM
appreciate the humor in the last line....egg salad is one of my favs!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 4:56 AM
My husband’s too! He asked me to make him some a couple days ago. I love using my instant pot to hard-boil. The method makes it easy for me.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 8:44 AM
Your "Egg Salad" is a fun/creative write with a cute/fun picture. Now I want an egg sandwich.... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 2:34 PM
LOL! Enjoy one!
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