Effulgence

She floats into a room and voices hush,
the silence at effulgence in her bloom,
as crimson rises to her cheeks in blush
to humble scarlet gardens and their plume.



Klimt: Portrait of a Lady in Black
Date Originally posted:  12/4/17
Contest:  Rithimus Divisa
Sponsor:  Gregory R Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Duet Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 4:19 PM
This is so lovely and brings such a sweet picture to mind. It reminds me of the days when I would blush at the "drop of a hat". Congrats on your win in the contest, Dale.
Hamilton Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Masterful writing Dale, congrats on the win!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:13 PM
Hello Dale Cregory Cozat, Just a wonderful poem. have a nice day my friend.
Cozart Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, Darlene.
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Hey, you did GREAT!!!! Top spot. Congratulations, my friend.
Cozart Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 8:41 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Luck of the draw I guess.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 11:02 AM
I remember this poem Dale. Klimt: Portrait of a Lady in Black I loved it so much I faved it. I am very happy to see this beauty at the top my friend. Congratulations on your deserving First Place! : ) xxoo
Cozart Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Kiser Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Beautiful, it should do well in the contest; good luck.
Sergi Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 8:35 PM
aA very flowery poem, Dale
Cozart Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Ralph.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 6:42 PM
you only found one, huh? I found four that i could have used. I had a few of my friends tell me the best of the four and I chose the one that they voted for second place. haha. I hope i made the right choice. (you found a real gem at least)
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Gorgeous, Dale. I am loving these little poems he had us put up!!
Cozart Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 6:17 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Me, too. As it turns out I only found one stand alone verse that would work. I'm glad I had it!
Ravidas Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 3:00 PM
This short text is so metaphorical that a reader sees through the author's eyes the protagonist blushing. It's kind of magic, i.e. a true poetry.
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