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My dear Miss Peach how lovely!
Your table boasts so fair
You've chosen the finest bubbly
Best porcelain plates and crystal ware

Your handpicked guests are perfect
They know just what to say
They are prefects without defects
With no real opinions per se

Your parties are full of boasting
With braggarts, blowhards and egos
Pomposity excels in what they are toasting
Meaningless, pointless placebos

So Miss Peach I beg you not be stilted
Or try in your best elegance to change
What manner you provide is boring and gilded
And matters not to bourgeois talk wearisomely deranged

October 20, 2020

Completely Your Choice (30) Poetry Contest
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Date: 10/23/2020 4:05:00 PM
Your sense of irony is spot on, Lonna. I love "prefects without defects" and "pointless placebos". Congratulations for your #1 win this week! Enjoy your day ~ John
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/23/2020 4:33:00 PM
Thanks John. I had fun with this one.
Date: 10/22/2020 5:05:00 AM
Yes! It seems the world has become more superficial as you have expressed so brilliantly in this poem. Many congrats on your top-notch win, Lonna. ~ Elaine
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/23/2020 4:33:00 PM
Well, lol, at least they are texting now.
Date: 10/21/2020 3:37:00 PM
Sad steps one takes to impress their life upon others more than true, wondrously delightful, Lonna, my compliments on your 1st Place win, Aloha! William
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/21/2020 6:32:00 PM
I have known so many that do not have the confidence to be themselves and live just to impress others. But, one could say that we live in a world of pretense. I am very happy to have found my words as you and other writers have. Thank you William!
Date: 10/20/2020 8:24:00 PM
Lovely, Lonna, and very affective . I have had a few friends like that. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/21/2020 6:33:00 PM
Hello Eve! Yes, I think we have all been subject to those experiences. Thank you for commenting. Wish you well and happy. Lonna
Date: 10/20/2020 12:41:00 PM
Thank goodness for COVID-19! No more of that! Aloha! Rico
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/20/2020 2:16:00 PM
Lol!! You are totally right. Thank you Rico

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