Effete

My dear Miss Peach how lovely!
Your table boasts so fair
You've chosen the finest bubbly
Best porcelain plates and crystal ware

Your handpicked guests are perfect
They know just what to say
They are prefects without defects
With no real opinions per se

Your parties are full of boasting
With braggarts, blowhards and egos
Pomposity excels in what they are toasting
Meaningless, pointless placebos

So Miss Peach I beg you not be stilted
Or try in your best elegance to change
What manner you provide is boring and gilded
And matters not to bourgeois talk wearisomely deranged

October 20, 2020

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Watt Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Your sense of irony is spot on, Lonna. I love "prefects without defects" and "pointless placebos". Congratulations for your #1 win this week! Enjoy your day ~ John
Blodgett Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:33 PM
Thanks John. I had fun with this one.
George   Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Yes! It seems the world has become more superficial as you have expressed so brilliantly in this poem. Many congrats on your top-notch win, Lonna. ~ Elaine
Blodgett Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:33 PM
Well, lol, at least they are texting now.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Sad steps one takes to impress their life upon others more than true, wondrously delightful, Lonna, my compliments on your 1st Place win, Aloha! William
Blodgett Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:32 PM
I have known so many that do not have the confidence to be themselves and live just to impress others. But, one could say that we live in a world of pretense. I am very happy to have found my words as you and other writers have. Thank you William!
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 8:24 PM
Lovely, Lonna, and very affective . I have had a few friends like that. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Blodgett Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Hello Eve! Yes, I think we have all been subject to those experiences. Thank you for commenting. Wish you well and happy. Lonna
Leffanta Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:41 PM
Thank goodness for COVID-19! No more of that! Aloha! Rico
Blodgett Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Lol!! You are totally right. Thank you Rico
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