Emile Pinet Poet Quatrain

Effervescent Pools

In my dream, I'm gazing
out over the ocean
when glints in the moonlight,
guide my eyes to motion.

Above the breaking waves
I hear a mermaid's plea;
and like a succubus,
She lures me to the sea.

Her slow-gyrating hips
cast a hypnotic trance;
sensually swaying
like an erotic dance.

A sexy siren swims
in effervescent pools;
beckoning me with eyes
blue as sapphire jewels.

This vixen invites me
to revel in her touch,
and my fevered body
longs to hold her so much.

Whispering promises,
She calls me to her side;
till I awaken; and
Her face becomes a blur.

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Line Gauthier May 25, 2018 at 8:27 PM Lovely dream. Well penned, Emile.

Skat A April 30, 2015 at 6:34 PM EMILE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love Emile Pinet April 30, 2015 at 9:12 PM Thanks again Skat, I appreciate it. Emile.

Sandra Haight April 28, 2015 at 5:38 PM What an amazing dream, Emile! Love your poem, and congrats on your nice win! Sandra Emile Pinet April 29, 2015 at 7:47 AM Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your visits and encouragements. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 2:38 PM Emile, this one is the most amazing one for this contest :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA Emile Pinet April 29, 2015 at 7:46 AM Ah Linda, your friendly words always cheer me up, thank you so much. Emile.

Rob Carmack April 28, 2015 at 11:37 AM How I wish we could be saved so easily from the walking Sirens! :) Excellent poem Emile, congrats. Emile Pinet April 29, 2015 at 7:45 AM Thanks Rob, I appreciate your encouraging visits. Emile.

Jan Allison April 20, 2015 at 2:35 PM Wow I wish I had dreams like this Emile - simply wonderful imagery and a lovely flow to the rhyme:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Jan Allison April 20, 2015 at 4:08 PM Oh so true Emile and give us reason to go on when times are tough! Hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet April 20, 2015 at 4:03 PM Thanks Jan, dreams are how we make sense of reality. Emile.

Anna Hopper April 20, 2015 at 1:21 PM Gorgeous, flowing art! Thanks for sharing! Emile Pinet April 20, 2015 at 4:02 PM Thanks Anna, I appreciate your visits. Emile.

M. L. Kiser April 20, 2015 at 10:17 AM Wow, what a dream; the sea does it's best to lure us all. Beautifully penned. Emile Pinet April 20, 2015 at 10:37 AM Thanks so much, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2015 at 9:16 AM a dream of longing. Like my dreams of flying. How we wish these kinds of dreams never to end. VEry well done!! Emile Pinet April 20, 2015 at 9:43 AM Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your visits. Emile.