Effervescent Pools

In my dream, I'm gazing out over the ocean when glints in the moonlight, guide my eyes to motion. Above the breaking waves I hear a mermaid's plea; and like a succubus, She lures me to the sea. Her slow-gyrating hips cast a hypnotic trance; sensually swaying like an erotic dance. A sexy siren swims in effervescent pools; beckoning me with eyes blue as sapphire jewels. This vixen invites me to revel in her touch, and my fevered body longs to hold her so much. Whispering promises, She calls me to her side; till I awaken; and Her face becomes a blur.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/25/2018 8:27:00 PM
Lovely dream. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 4/30/2015 6:34:00 PM
EMILE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:12:00 PM
Thanks again Skat, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 4/28/2015 5:38:00 PM
What an amazing dream, Emile! Love your poem, and congrats on your nice win! Sandra
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your visits and encouragements. Emile.
Date: 4/28/2015 2:38:00 PM
Emile, this one is the most amazing one for this contest :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2015 7:46:00 AM
Ah Linda, your friendly words always cheer me up, thank you so much. Emile.
Date: 4/28/2015 11:37:00 AM
How I wish we could be saved so easily from the walking Sirens! :) Excellent poem Emile, congrats.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2015 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Rob, I appreciate your encouraging visits. Emile.
Date: 4/20/2015 2:35:00 PM
Wow I wish I had dreams like this Emile - simply wonderful imagery and a lovely flow to the rhyme:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2015 4:08:00 PM
Oh so true Emile and give us reason to go on when times are tough! Hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/20/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Jan, dreams are how we make sense of reality. Emile.
Date: 4/20/2015 1:21:00 PM
Gorgeous, flowing art! Thanks for sharing!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/20/2015 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 4/20/2015 10:17:00 AM
Wow, what a dream; the sea does it's best to lure us all. Beautifully penned.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/20/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 4/20/2015 9:16:00 AM
a dream of longing. Like my dreams of flying. How we wish these kinds of dreams never to end. VEry well done!!
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Date: 4/20/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
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