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Effervescence

Boiled down to its simplest element
our vitality is our power
it's the inner source of enthusiasm
that gives our life the effervescence
that makes it all worthwhile ~


AP: Honorable Mention 2025
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Swan Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 5:03 AM
'effervescence' - what a fabulous word: Don't pop the bubble! It says enthusiasm with onomatopoeia - just right. J :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Thanks for your delightful comment, Jeanette ~ have a wonderful day
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 4:56 PM
I agree...effervescence is our inner source. Well said...wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ most appreciated
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