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I lay underneath the stars at night, without you they don't shine as bright

Blue skies are shades of gray, cloudy, with no sun in sight

Alone, with visions of your eyes, the only eyes that has ever danced with mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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J.T. Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 7:40 PM
nicely done - JH
Ink-U-Script Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Enjoyed this write of yours!!
Situation Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 12:51 PM
they dont shine. great line.
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