Eerie Thoughts and a Dreary Place

I'm seeping back into that place,

That place in which it is unsafe.


This place that feels no sorrows,

but only hate.


No anger, only chafe.


I am seeping my soaking body into the puddle beneath the ground,

The puddle that is muddled with eerie pictures and thoughts of my dreary sounds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 9, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Amanda Gov, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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November 4, 2012 at 9:45 PM
It's short, but has so much depth and complexity to it. The visual representation of your emotion really makes that clear
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