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'eerie Eyes'

spotted shadows 
eerie eyes encapsulate
brave bats in cave


*having a go at an 
alliterative haiku, 
took me forever I know* lol 
Ps: Chris, contest closed 
long before I finished this 
one guys, just figured it 
would be nice to give it a go :)

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Kash Poet

March 17, 2011 at 12:00 PM

I missed this excellent Haiku of You Wilma---wonderful write---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2011 at 9:02 AM

An excellent try Wilma and a wonderful one too... keep on tap for next Alliteration contest luv.. u get an "A" for excellent effort..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

March 12, 2011 at 7:18 PM

oooo! sounds creepy.. in that cave... sad you missed the contest,, enjoyed your poem... p.d.

Jack Horne

March 9, 2011 at 12:17 PM

very spooky - love it : ) Jack

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 7, 2011 at 10:27 PM

eek, eek, I think those eyes are staring at me O.O.... way to go for you for trying out alliterative haiku -- it sure can be a challenge :)- - and uh-oh, missy you are sleeping at wee hours in the morning now?? tsk, tsk! not good at all --- hugs to you missy, hope you're not a zombie like me?

Andrea Dietrich

March 7, 2011 at 6:58 AM

I like the great picture that it depicts, Wilma!

James Fraser

March 6, 2011 at 2:52 PM

I must investigate this alternative Haiku and give it a try after reading your gem Wilma. Good luck in Chris's contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

March 6, 2011 at 2:32 PM

This is really great, Wilma! I love the image you painted of the bats' eyes encapsulated by shadows. You succeeded where I failed. I could not come up with an "alliterative haiku" for the life of me -- spent a lot of time trying. Hope you get a big win in the contest! Love, Carolyn