Eel Wheel

there once was a very clever eel
who liked to grab her tail like a wheel
always caused a giggle
every time she wiggled
she just loved the way it made her feel

Make Me Laugh Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
8/26/19

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Scars Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 10:47 AM
eeek, those wiggles, great one- congrats :)-luloo
Mcguire Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Thank you LL! :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:34 AM
Enough to give anyone a giggle, not just the eels lol . Congrats on your win. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Thanks buddy from across the pond!
Gauthier Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 11:08 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Thank you Miss Line!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Tim, congratulations on your winning placement, I enjoyed your cute and clever limerick, it made me laugh!
Mcguire Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so much Tania!
Gauthier Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Very cute, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Line!
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Perfect limerick, Timothy, it reminded me of some dogs that love to chase their tails. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Mcguire Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Miss Eve!
Laurie Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 8:03 PM
G'day Timothy … she must like going 'round in circles all day - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 8:33 PM
You are right! Sounds like a Billy Preston song
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