Eduardo's Passion

A feeling takes over all my senses, I shiver yet its a warm day
I look, and pause for I loose my self an eternity at the sight
My mind begins to dream, to desire ever so fast I sweat
My heart beats faster and faster, I yearn, I twist inside with desire

Her body
        The shape of an angels
I run my hands all over her, allowing my hands
        To speak to her
She replies with a deep sigh, and I start to stutter

Her soft skin, smooth
White, I find myself asking of such beauty to be at my side
Her lips are so soft, I begin to caress them with my lips
And all I see is my hands at her hips

Her back
        I feel my skin on her skin, a feeling of being one
Again my hands are running all over her
        We are both letting our bodies do the talking
And a conversation takes place for hours

We dance, and turn
Not stopping as our bodies truly fear the heat, the burn
I love her every curve, her eyes kiss me as they look upon me
In her eyes I see the desire, and I do start the fire

Her legs
        Where to start
I love every inch of her body, and I kiss it all
        I make love to her with my verse
My poetry is her desire, my words are the fire

Beneath a moon
Under a sun
Over the world
I love you, your beautiful body is my passion







-For my bear
Muah mami.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/17/2009 1:15:00 PM
Honest honest honest and passionate!!! This rhymes draw the true silhouette of a lady, outstanding!!! Dude, this is awosme and drowned in fast paced heartbeats; thanks for sharing!=D
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Date: 5/17/2009 11:46:00 AM
what a tribute for the mama of love,emotions and life,jeremiah is kind and cute,but its nice to see Eduardo every now and then,so passionate,as passionate as melting choc,im gonna add you with my top poets,you desreve it my friend--we desire your poetry cos its deep and its all YOU--CHARMA
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