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Edit In Life

Restructure Some wording In the dangling Of Meaningless Sentences Writing is The Sparkle Crackling in Forgotten fires Inside The minds Time To shine Wind us up And see Us spin Don't Topple Us over Regression Never wins

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Eiza Evangelista

Date: 1/31/2017 12:50:00 AM

very nice indeed. I like the last part

Holly Bohto
Date: 1/31/2017 2:04:00 AM

thanks. I forgot I even wrote this one. my writing it going in so many different directions lately. Thanks for visiting.I like your style too.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/5/2016 10:00:00 PM

Your poems make me delve into the depths of my own mind, heart and soul. You are an amazing poet.

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/6/2016 6:01:00 AM

Taking risks in writing. That's what we poets do. Thanks Christy. You have what it takes to be the amazing one.

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2016 7:16:00 PM

Indeed, regression never wins, forward is the future where the unknown awaits and it is so exciting. Really nicely expressed Holly.

Holly Bohto
Date: 10/31/2016 9:08:00 PM

thanks Chris. I didn't think anyone would understand this one. my mind never shuts off. thoughts run into themselves.