Holly Bohto Poet Free verse

Edit In Life

Restructure
Some wording
In the dangling
Of
Meaningless
Sentences

Writing is
The Sparkle
Crackling in
Forgotten fires
Inside
The minds
Time
To shine

Wind us up
And see
Us spin
Don't
Topple 
Us over 
Regression
Never wins

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Eiza Evangelista January 31, 2017 at 12:50 AM very nice indeed. I like the last part Holly Bohto January 31, 2017 at 2:04 AM thanks. I forgot I even wrote this one. my writing it going in so many different directions lately. Thanks for visiting.I like your style too.

Christy Stover November 5, 2016 at 10:00 PM Your poems make me delve into the depths of my own mind, heart and soul. You are an amazing poet. Holly Bohto November 6, 2016 at 6:01 AM Taking risks in writing. That's what we poets do. Thanks Christy. You have what it takes to be the amazing one.

Chris Green October 31, 2016 at 7:16 PM Indeed, regression never wins, forward is the future where the unknown awaits and it is so exciting. Really nicely expressed Holly. Holly Bohto October 31, 2016 at 9:08 PM thanks Chris. I didn't think anyone would understand this one. my mind never shuts off. thoughts run into themselves.