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Get those
initial thoughts
down
a.s.a.p.
That we thought
were so brilliant
and flowing
Riding high on
our cleverness
Then we sleep
In our beds
Who's reading
And responding
As we saw zzz's
Then we get up
and check
No response
So we visit again
That poem that
Didn't quite cut it
As we read
We think
How could I write
This crap
I can't even
Understand this
I wasn't in
My right mind
Better pull my
sleeves up
Click my pen
And restructure
This one again
Then they'll
Get it
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