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Poem written for “Pick-a-Title, Vol. 55” poetry contest, Edward Ibeh, sponsor, February 1, 2026. 

EDGE OF NIGHT

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Boots scrape cold stone~ the road unspools like old film, each frame a town where no one knows their names. Twilight licks their shadows long. A train expels steel and distant oranges. They swap coins for warmth in paper cups~ the dark drinks their voices whole. They trade silence for the weight of the question: Where next? The wind carries no answer, only the scent of distant rain. The last train gasps, a ghost leaving the platform. They step aboard— not toward home, but toward the dark’s wide, waiting arms… ….and moonlight fills the creases
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Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Sometimes traveling is fun and exciting ~ other times, it is a chore and feels very cold. You have captured that well.
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2026 at 6:48 AM
Creative winning work you have penned in this one. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K
Alex Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 8:47 PM
Starting with "Boots scrape cold stone~ ", the entire poem is a picturesque narration ending with a vivid scene, "….and moonlight fills the creases". Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 8:44 PM
Such a superb poem, Sara. I really loved the 3rd stanza. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
Hind Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 10:30 PM
really beautiful, I could feel it breathing...
Rolland Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 7:41 AM
so urban poetry, beautiful, thanks
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