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Edge of Night

On this last railroad journey, all’s ablaze new stars pulse over veins of feathered trees, and melt in their faint blinks of night's decrees they flicker through me white solace and haze. Quite often, I have scanned the moonlight’s trail as winds can pierce into my heart and know my need for strength will always thrive, and row until end’s trip, when grinds of wheel travail. Much like this ride, I'll walk the endless course as seen among wayfarers’ eyes dark gold where swallows reel above to reinforce the edge of night, far fair, I do behold. For hope is always wishful, always strong and, only then shall my dreams rush, headlong. Soap Opera Titles Contest: Janis Thompson 10/25/2018 --------------------- Spenserian Sonnet ~ 'abab bcbc cdcd ee.'

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Date: 11/11/2018 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well penned.
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Date: 11/8/2018 11:38:00 PM
Another stunner from your talented pen Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:35:00 PM
I love trains and the loneliness of the rails was appealing. Nothing is lonelier than hearing a train whistle at night. Great comparison. Congratulations and thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 11/8/2018 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations , nette. a real winner!!
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Date: 11/2/2018 12:26:00 PM
Enjoyed your lovely sonnet Nette. love phyl
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Date: 11/1/2018 1:11:00 AM
Wonderful, I saw the contest, so do you know this soap opera? Lovely poem!!!
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Date: 10/30/2018 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Nette. You have written such a lovely poem..much enjoyed! Best wishes for a win...Happy Halloween hugs//Charlie
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Date: 10/30/2018 8:01:00 AM
Enjoyed your sonnet, Nette, very nicely done for the contest. John
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Date: 10/25/2018 6:03:00 PM
simply amazing, nette.. you light the night of poetic ambitions with your skilled quill!
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Date: 10/25/2018 3:39:00 PM
Wow, love your poem, nette..love the style, the words and flow. not unlike, the sonnet masters of old,
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Date: 10/25/2018 7:03:00 AM
The titles flow nicely in your poem, nette. Enjoyed reading it..well written ending. Best for a win.
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Date: 10/24/2018 6:19:00 PM
a different style from you, less soaring, more earth tone...really like this one...fav
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Nette. Tom.
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:53:00 PM
This is excellent Nette. I love the ending too :)
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