Edge of Night

On this last railroad journey, all’s ablaze
new stars pulse over veins of feathered trees,
and melt in their faint blinks of night's decrees
they flicker through me white solace and haze. 

Quite often, I have scanned the moonlight’s trail
as winds can pierce into my heart and know
my need for strength will always thrive, and row
until end’s trip, when grinds of wheel travail. 

Much like this ride, I'll walk the endless course
as seen among wayfarers’ eyes dark gold
where swallows reel above to reinforce
the edge of night, far fair, I do behold.

For  hope is always wishful, always strong
and, only then shall my dreams rush, headlong.



Soap Opera Titles Contest: Janis Thompson
10/25/2018
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Spenserian Sonnet ~  'abab bcbc cdcd ee.'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well penned.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Another stunner from your talented pen Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:35 PM
I love trains and the loneliness of the rails was appealing. Nothing is lonelier than hearing a train whistle at night. Great comparison. Congratulations and thanks for entering the contest.
Sergi Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Congratulations , nette. a real winner!!
Babcock Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Enjoyed your lovely sonnet Nette. love phyl
Vaso Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Wonderful, I saw the contest, so do you know this soap opera? Lovely poem!!!
Messina Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Nette. You have written such a lovely poem..much enjoyed! Best wishes for a win...Happy Halloween hugs//Charlie
Gondolf Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Enjoyed your sonnet, Nette, very nicely done for the contest. John
Man Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 6:03 PM
simply amazing, nette.. you light the night of poetic ambitions with your skilled quill!
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Wow, love your poem, nette..love the style, the words and flow. not unlike, the sonnet masters of old,
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:03 AM
The titles flow nicely in your poem, nette. Enjoyed reading it..well written ending. Best for a win.
Parker Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 6:19 PM
a different style from you, less soaring, more earth tone...really like this one...fav
Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Beautiful sonnet Nette. Tom.
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:53 PM
This is excellent Nette. I love the ending too :)
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