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Edge of Me

perched on a prominent edge of me I ache looking through my dream debris compelled I sight a prospective ledge where bits of my gray are shown in sketch sadly no colors of me do I detect why does no dream ~ ~ dream to console me

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/24/2025 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations CayCay, On your successful placement on merit. This poem is profound, deeply emotional and evocative. It possesses a dark beauty underpinning the intense images as backdrop. Howard

Sand Blown

Date: 3/21/2025 5:46:00 AM

you make things clear....i've had problems with....deep-press-ons of recessions..... had to finally just let go.......len

Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2025 8:45:00 PM

Very beautiful, loved loved the end

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2025 2:33:00 PM

Wow I LOVE this. One of your best. A fave, Caycay.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/17/2025 5:33:00 AM

Dear CayCay, Wow, this one sits on the skin like a shiver. There’s a rawness here, a quiet ache that lingers in the spaces between words. That prominent edge where it feels so exposed, so vulnerable, as if standing at the precipice of something not yet named. Pondering! Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2025 10:27:00 PM

Sometime we have a lot going on in our minds and unable to switch off resulting in troubled dreams. Hopefully the colours will return. Good luck in the contest CayCay. Enjoy your week ahead. Happy St Patrick's day. Tom

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/17/2025 2:20:00 AM

Hi, Tom, so glad you visited. This dream poem is pure fiction born from one of the lines that popped up in my head. I wish you an enjoyable weekend, too .. CayCay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2025 8:51:00 PM

Color in that dream, I say... Perhaps your 'dreaming mind' is overwhelmed by all your colorful poems and comments!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/16/2025 10:12:00 PM

This is not personal, but I am overwhelmed, so perhaps your advice would be good to take regardless. Enjoy you ... CayCay