Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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Edge of Insight

Why are some so quick to judge

Before they know all you've been thru?

They'd rather give a nasty nudge

Than take a stab at grasping you

And following assumptions, trudge

Upon the shining things you do.


There are so few who understand

That ALL of us are tending strife

And all that we had wished or planned

Is at the mercy of our "REAL" life

(I hope from that high place they stand

They don't fall down on their own knife).



* FOURTH PLACE in the "Judgemental People and Haters" Poetry Contest, Brenda Chiri, Sponsor, and in honor of my good friend Robert Lindley. *

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Eve Roper December 12, 2017 at 8:49 PM Gregory, nicely done congratulations on your win hugs Eve Gregory Richard Barden December 13, 2017 at 1:21 AM Very kind of you, Eve, thank you so much ... and a hug right back at you, friend! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 12, 2017 at 1:39 PM Elegant and eloquent and always poetic dear friend, congratulations! xomo <3 Gregory Richard Barden December 13, 2017 at 1:20 AM That's my sweet friend, Maureen, who always has a kind word for me, and a heartfelt comment of encouragement ... please know that it is so appreciated, and that you are never taken for granted. You are one of the best things about my joining Poetry Soup. Thank you and blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3

Subimal Sinha-Roy December 12, 2017 at 12:43 AM Congratulations, Greg on your win. The last line is a real catcher. Gregory Richard Barden December 12, 2017 at 8:13 AM Thank you so much, Subimal - I'm pleased you liked it, Friend! :-)

Robert Lindley December 11, 2017 at 5:10 PM Greg, love your verses and the light they so brilliantly shine my friend.Congratulations on your win in Brenda's Haters contest. I too, hope they not fall on their knife and instead they eventually see the light.\! Gregory Richard Barden December 11, 2017 at 8:58 PM Thank you very much, Robert, I'm glad you liked it ... I wrote another poem for you, ("To The Slanderers"), but decided to keep this one in the contest, (maybe I should have gone with the other, it might have placed higher?), but the important thing is you saw the support from so many who appreciate you! Blessings, Dear Friend - I'm so glad you're not leaving! :-)

Aqua Marine September 4, 2017 at 2:53 PM Understanding is everything, being understood even more...Thank you for a compassionate and merciful write- I am sure it will be an encouragement to many here who need that kind of support, Greg! ( Much appreciated!) : )) Gregory Richard Barden September 14, 2017 at 9:56 PM That's really very sweet of you, Aqua, and I would love it if that were to be ... sadly, it seems not many people are reading this one, (or commenting, anyway). Blessings to you for your kind comments, my friend! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich September 3, 2017 at 9:07 PM GREAT approach to this theme, Greg. and that ending line is brilliant. Gregory Richard Barden September 3, 2017 at 9:55 PM Thank you so much, Andrea ... it saddens me sometimes that, when things don't go as planned or expected, people would rather just assume bad things of you, than have the patience to find out what really happened. Oh, what a different world it would be. Blessings, Friend. <3