Edge As Despair

I get the feeling that people are telling me to step back from the edge.
I don’t know where to start with people anymore.

I get the feeling there is no edge.
I usually start with my eyes though my heart is a sinking ship.

I am apprehensive over writing this in a first-person narrative.
I get the feeling I’m telling myself to step back from the edge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 15, 2009 at 3:31 PM
This is very thought-provoking, Matt. I do believe there is an "edge," and sometimes we all have to tell ourselves to "step back from" it. The last verse is quite profound!
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