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I was once there, help isn't available, I sit and wait, nobody picks up the call, To the bed alone, in one lonely night, yes I've tossed myself, to the edge of this life, The life I have, I almost tossed it out, Or maybe I would give it back, to just give up,

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Date: 12/23/2024 10:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Dona Salapar
Date: 3/12/2025 3:24:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/19/2024 6:38:00 AM
The edge being a dark place Dona….but you never went over that edge! Talk to someone i if that feeling arises again! Debx
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Dona Salapar
Date: 3/12/2025 3:23:00 AM
Thanks Deb
Date: 10/19/2024 6:05:00 AM
I think many of us have been on this edge... I hope can find help..
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Dona Salapar
Date: 3/12/2025 3:23:00 AM
Hope they're getting the help they need too.
Date: 10/19/2024 6:04:00 AM
Increasingly many are on the edge, so much stress and heartache in this world. You depict the feeling well
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Dona Salapar
Date: 3/12/2025 3:24:00 AM
Thanks Tom

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