Eden's Stairway
Travel
this garden path
grown in pixelations
worldly colors lain before me
I weep
If only i could share the breathtaking pic this was inspired by... Heaven on earth, AAAHHH
Actually another poet (another site) suggested i use more imagery and blah, blah, blah
This form cinquain leaves not much room for error, so every word has to
be meaningful, (besides it's officially only my 2nd attempt ) i even like the way 'cinquain'
rolls off my tongue, CINQUAIN, cinquian,, Everybody, all together now cinq ... tee-he
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