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Branches of a bonsai on canvas resembled two figures with feet touching. The full light of the moon shone from the corner.

Edenical Clutch


Edenical clutch Adam & Eve bonsai bare side of moon it’s bright and sinless light seems a world away
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Wolf Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 7:32 PM
So true -- worlds away. Sadly...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Sadly so…
Hind Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 4:56 PM
A fav for this one, too. Very haunting, left me in awe those five little lines....
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Thank you kindly! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 10:18 PM
Wow I really like this. The last two lines are stunning, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Andrea! I was inspired by a piece of art. Blessings :)
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