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Branches of a bonsai on canvas resembled two figures with feet touching. The full light of the moon shone from the corner.

Edenical clutch Adam & Eve bonsai bare side of moon it’s bright and sinless light seems a world away

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Date: 7/29/2024 7:32:00 PM
So true -- worlds away. Sadly...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:46:00 PM
Sadly so…
Date: 7/29/2024 4:56:00 PM
A fav for this one, too. Very haunting, left me in awe those five little lines....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:46:00 PM
Thank you kindly! :)
Date: 7/28/2024 10:18:00 PM
Wow I really like this. The last two lines are stunning, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! I was inspired by a piece of art. Blessings :)
Date: 7/28/2024 5:29:00 PM
This ain't yer average tanka, fosho. Unique poem Kim, as we have come to expect from you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom! :)

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