Eden To Me

Eden to me is paradise so grand With nature wonders of majestic brand Earth’s haven as providentially planned Lingering still --- oh, sweet musical land.
Marked with outstanding creation beauty Showcasing landscapes and parks of serenity Wafting blest air of zephyr’s purity Refreshing hearts toward blissful tranquility.
Eden to me is paradise so grand With nature wonders of majestic brand Earth’s haven as providentially planned Lingering still --- oh, sweet musical land.
Eden and gracious songs empower faith and soul Reviving spirit for thanksgiving goal To fulfill with joy* God-granted role While praising His goodness, making life whole.
Eden to me is paradise so grand With nature wonders of majestic brand Earth’s haven as providentially planned Lingering still --- oh, sweet musical land.
*Philippians 2:2 Fulfil ye my joy, that ye be likeminded, having the same love, being of one accord, of one mind. June 22, 2020 2nd place, "Wales" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward; judged on 7/5/2020. Edited on June 22, 2023 (Original title was "Wales to Me")

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Date: 7/7/2020 9:00:00 AM
Your tribute to Wales is so delightful and soothing Beata. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 7/6/2020 3:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win Agustin! Beautiful verse! Joyful and holy!
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations with applause for such beauty and joy in your poetry.
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Date: 7/5/2020 1:38:00 PM
Beautifully done, Beata, with a real lyricism and acknowledgement of the rich landscape. Congratulations and God bless ~ John
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Date: 7/5/2020 1:28:00 PM
Lovely lyrical tribute, Beata. Congratulations Blessings!
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Date: 6/22/2020 3:34:00 PM
a lovely piece penned so well Beata, HOpe you're well. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/22/2020 5:59:00 AM
Best wishes for a win. God bless you, dear friend. Happy writing. Love in Christ, Gina
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